Friday, January 14, 2022

2 - Antonio L: I Am From Poem

I am from many places in one area

Only venturing out once to the South


Where I gained 2 new family nicknames


Someone who wants to be a jack of all trades


To know a bit of everything 


To be more helpful


I am from helpful minds


Who make up helpful people


People who have taught me basic morals


And more beyond that


I’ve had in California


Only venturing out once to Tennessee


Where I gained 2 new family nicknames


I am from sunny Sundays sitting in the living room


Watching TV with family


When everyone is off from their jobs


And days at school


Enjoying the hours together and relaxing


I am from the countless commercials I've memorized


By heart from all the shows I’ve watched


I am from sophisticated music taste


I am from remembering the past too much and wanting to go back


I am from errors that never let me down



(Word count: 156)

2 comments:

  1. Lots of repetition was used plus lots of descriptive and literal words. It has all the information about yourself and some of it's pretty interesting. That picture is a pretty funny one too.

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  2. I like the way you used repetition, as well as descriptive words to create a flow throughout your poem. The information about yourself is pretty interesting too.

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